11月7日香港SAT考題解析及寫作范文

更新時間:2019-06-27   豐果園農業綜合開發有限公司

  你們都知道了:

  11月7日亞洲SAT考試重復2013年3月北美SAT考試整套卷子

  今天(11月7日)SAT考試亞洲卷的寫作題目是:

  Is it foolish to develop or improve things that already exist?

  這道題目是典型的“創新”話題,通過回答:No, 可以使用經典的創新的話題的例子寫。用創新的例子來證明:現存的一切事物都可以通過創新和不斷改進來使之變得更好:

  比如:喬布斯讓電腦和手機變得更好;Uber或者滴滴讓打車變得更方便;Tesla讓汽車變得更加環保;屠呦呦改進了治療瘧疾的治療法;李小龍改進了功夫等等。

  另外,今年10月3日的SAT考試也是重復北美原題,并且寫作也考的是典型的話題:貢獻社會。可見,最后的幾次舊SAT考試的重復性很強。今后同學們應對12月和1月SAT寫作考試,一定要把歷年考過的如下高頻話題準備好充分的例子來應對,比如:創新、挑戰權威、逆境成功、貢獻社會、合作競爭、真實謊言、科技利弊等。

  下面這篇范文以屠呦呦改進和提升傳統的治療瘧疾方法的貢獻以及李小龍通過創新和改進功夫的成就證明了不斷改進和完善現存的事物是非常重要的。

  Is it foolish to develop or improve things that already exist?

  The whole history of human civilization is a process during which people are not just satisfied with what have already existed and continuously strive to perfect and upgrade those existed things. From the examples of Tu youyou and Bruce Lee, it can clearly be seen that extraordinary persons are those who could develop and enhance existing things.

  Tu youyou, a Chinese medical scientist, pharmaceutical chemist, pharmacist, and educator is known for discovering artemisinin and dihydroartemisinin, used to treat malaria, which saved millions of lives dedicatedly improving traditional medicines. Malaria was once considered as one of the fatal diseases affecting human lives and was juxtaposed with cancer and AIDS. More than one million people died because of Malaia annually. Although there were some existed medicines, they were expensive and not effective enough to save millions of infected people, especially African people. The cost-effective treatment has been a puzzle for scientists for centuries. Facing this situation, Tu youyou spent 11 years working on developing effective cure measures for malaria. Her notebook summarized 640 preions. Her team also screened over 2,000 traditional Chinese recipes and made 380 herbal extracts, which were tested on mice. In order not to be disturbed, she sent her two daughters away to live in other families. It is just through devotedly focusing on improving medicine without any hesitation that Tu youyou discovered artemisinin (named qinghaosu in Chinese), which saved 0.24 billion persons each year in Africa alone. Her devotion to improving medicine won her the noble reputation as the first Chinese Nobel laureate in physiology or medicine and the first citizen of the People's Republic of China to receive the Nobel Prize in natural sciences, as well as the first Chinese person to receive the Lasker Award.

  Besides Tu youyou, Bruce Lee is another successful example in real life who obtained outstanding achievement through totally concentrating on improving and developing the existed thing, Kung Fu. Bruce Lee, a revolutionary of world’s martial arts, the father of MMA, the world-well-known filmmaker, was fascinated by Kung Fu of all kinds since he was young and throughout his life. But he was not satisfied with the current martial art system and was eager to improve and perfect it and build his own system. In order to enhance existed traditional Kung Fu, he would not lose a single second on exercising. He trained himself diligently everyday with unimaginable intensity, far beyond the boundary of human physics. He also read extensively on martial art and got in touch with other top-class martial art masters such as Joe Lewis, and Chunk Norris. There was nothing in his life that had no relation with his new and improved fighting system. The outcome of his concentration on perfecting Kung Fu was rewarding. He created a kind of creative Kung Fu, a free style boxing skill, which made him world-famous. He could do push ups with one finger only and kick a man away as far as 22 meters. He also created many world’s records, such as punching 7 times in one second. Even after he won the fame as the “world’s greatest fighter”, he did not stop developing and advancing Kung Fu. It was his continuous passion and focus on improving and developing Kung Fu by innovating his own martial art style that finally impressed westerners, wrote Kung Fu in western dictionary.

  From the stories of Tu youyou and Bruce Lee, it is evident that only by improving and developing already existed things could people accomplish tremendous success for themselves and make great discoveries and contributions to the world. Had Tu youyou and Bruce Less not been dedicated wholeheartedly to developing and improving existed things, millions of African people’s lives could not have been saved and Kung Fu and Bruce Lee could not have been so influential in the world. So, it is imperative for all of us to purse improvement in everything in our life. Only by doing so, can we achieve exceptional success and can our world become more beautiful.

  備考君順便再說幾句,CB越來越偷懶,10月份只是重復部分,這次竟然完全重復了,雖然這套試題CB沒有公開,但國內考試機構完全可以搞到,SAT考試改革之前,CB應該不會花太多心思放在最后幾次考試上,所以,也正好給了某些機構可乘之機,而現在這些機構已經開始在曬“命中”的戰果,答案正傳的歡。那么接下來的結果可能大家猜也能猜到了,要么大面積壓分,delay,嚴重的話還可能像去年一樣取消成績,所以備考君給大家一些建議:

  1、今年申請的學生:把重要心思花在文書材料上,SAT成績在美國大學招生官的錄取標準里肯定又降了一個檔次,所以文書的重要性更加突出,如何寫好文書,大家可以看今天發出的另一篇文章《杜克前招生官:優秀的文書是什么樣的》,如果自我感覺這次考試也沒有把握的話,盡快報名12月份的考試做備胎吧。

  2、對于明年申請的學生來說,把這次當一個考試體驗吧,還是做好新SAT備考的計劃,畢竟改革后的前幾次考試對大多數學生來說都是公平的。

(文章發布于:2016-01-11)

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